It's Not A Perfect Universe
by mystiqq_@hotmail.com
Archive: master_apprentice
Category: Romance, Angst, AU
Rating: NC 17
Warnings: Extreme Sexual Content, Extreme Violence, More
Warnings In The Spoiler at the end of the story text, I
recommend you just read it though with out spoiling it because
I feel that even though it contains content that some may not
like I feel that the story makes up for it. You decide though
if you want to spoil it.
Pairing: Q/O
Summary: This is a story of love, tragedy, revenge, and
eventually everlasting love.
Notes: This story is pretty raw. I had someone else look at it
and they gave the go ahead though. This is my first story ever
so please go easy on me. I've also only read a couple stories.
I welcome suggestions and both good and bad feedback. I need
the feedback if you ever want to get a good story out of me =)
Also, there may be a mirror story from Qui-Gon's point of view,
explaining why he was the way he was in this story ,if I get a
good response, if not I disavow ever writing this.
It had been three days since Obi-Wan had last seen his master
Qui-Gon Jinn. The rage and hurt he felt from the last time they
had been together was quickly being replaced with concern.
Concern for his lovers well being and concern for the once
strong bond they had between them. Yes, he knew that lately the
bond between them had become strained, but he still felt the
same. He deeply loved the man he called his master, as much as
he had when their love had seemed so impenetrable.
Obi-Wan mulled over all the hurtful things he'd said to his
master in their heated argument. As much as he beat himself up
for hurting the man, he knew that there were some things that
needed to be said. His master had grown too comfortable in
their relationship and was beginning to take advantage of
Obi-Wan's unconditional love for him. It started small of
course but soon it seemed that Qui was constantly hurting him
and making him feel inferior. The reason for this was clear to
Obi-Wan. Qui wanted to control him, and reap the benefits of
Obi's attempts to measure up.
Since the early days of their blissful love affair the
relationship seemed to be spiraling steadily down. Some days
were better than others but overall things were on a decline
from the start. Their love was strong though. So strong that it
was a long while before it really set into Obi-Wan's head that
they were in serious trouble. The beginning of this
understanding was a very dark day in his memory. A day that
Obi-Wan seldom thought about. The pain was always as fresh as
the moment it had first pierced his heart and shattered the
beautiful glass dream he called his reality.
Nothing was as terrible to Obi as the memory of when he had
first found out what his lover really thought of their bond.
Obi-Wan and Qui-Gon had shared a beautiful day together on the
planet of Lenoir. The planet was well known in the quadrant for
its tourist appeal. Many measures had been taken to make this
planet a near perfect paradise. The temperature was regulated,
the entire world was a work of a thousand artists, and every
aspect of the world had been perfected. There was no rain
except for some light sprinkles in the simulated rain forest.
Snow slopes designed specifically for skiing could be found
within walking distance of a warm summer day on a grassy knoll.
Of course there was every kind of shop imaginable selling
souvenirs of some kind all over the planet. There was also a
rather wild nightlife with a wide selection of attractions.
However, the two Jedi were not interested in the noisy
attractions of the worlds many theme parks. They simply wanted
a beautiful warm summer day in an isolated sunlit spot. They
were on an extended vacation and planned to spend 3 days on the
planet. This was their first day and they decided to have a
picnic and camp out under the stars. Everything was perfect.
They laughed, they ate and they savored every moment with each
other on their private patch of grass. Qui was wearing nothing
more than a pair of tan shorts. Obi-Wan had decided to wear his
normal outfit that day out of shyness but soon became
comfortable enough with his surroundings to take the outfit off
and put on a pair of tan shorts as well.
They could not have picked a better place for their romantic
get- away. There didn't seem to be a soul for miles. Once they
were both convinced that no one was around they became much
more free with each other. They lay naked in the grass and
talked while holding each other. Obi-Wan could still remember
how his master's arms had felt around him on that grassy knoll,
the way that his master had been so gentle and caring with him.
They had caressed each other for many hours before they decided
to make love.
The love they had made was gentle and caring. His master had
taken his time, slowly licking him from head to toe until his
erection was hard and so tense. He thought that if his master
were to put his lips around his manhood he would come
immediately. When his master finally did put his lips around
the tip of Obi-Wans penis and worked it all the way into his
mouth, Obi-Wan came so hard that his entire body tingled. He
moaned so loudly he was afraid someone had heard him.
Even though Obi-Wan had already come, he knew their lovemaking
was far from over. His master stood up while Obi-Wan got to his
knees and prepared to pleasure him. Qui's erection began to
grow while his Padawan licked and sucked on his balls. Once
Qui's penis had grown fully, Obi-Wan took it all the way into
his mouth and began to ease his masters large cock fully into
his slick throat. Once he had it seated, Obi began to work his
throat muscles while Qui-Gon moaned in appreciation.
After pleasing his master, Obi got down on all fours and waited
with his ass spread open, eager to be filled with his masters'
cock. When Qui-Gon first entered him, Obi-Wan groaned from the
pain of his masters' large cock thrusting inside him.
Eventually though, he began to push his ass back into his
masters groin, driving the thick cock deeper and deeper into
his willing ass. Soon his master began to moan and his body
began to tense up with the anticipation of coming in his
Padawans tight ass.
Obi could not help but begin to come himself after feeling his
masters' cock rub against his prostate for so long. Obi-Wan let
out a moan and came on the ground, his inner muscles tensing on
Qui-Gons already overly sensitized cock. His master tightened
up, thrust himself deep into Obi-Wans ass and emptied his seed
inside him.
They both lay for a long while in the grass, feeling completely
content and satiated. They were both very satisfied physically,
mentally and emotionally. The couple was very happy to be
together in such beautiful scenery, even if it was for the most
part man-made. After dark they sat under the stars and talked
about inconsequential things. They both became tired early and
went to sleep in separate sleeping bags.
Several hours later Obi-Wan was awakened by a terrible dream.
In his dream, his master had left him all alone in the darkness
and was not planning to come back for him. He called for his
master but Qui-Gon did not answer, either physically or through
the bond. When Obi-Wan awoke he found that his master truly was
gone. His sleeping bag was left as abandoned as the dream
Obi-Wan had been.
Obi-Wan waited for a while to see if his master would come
back. Perhaps he had just gone to use the bathroom or to
meditate, he thought. After whiling away some time in quiet
meditation himself, Obi-Wan became concerned and decided to go
look for his master. He decided to go to the nearest town that
was only a half-mile away. His Force sense told him he would
find Qui-Gon there and that he should hurry, so he took off on
foot and ran as fast as he could.
Obi-Wan quickly arrived in the nearest small town. Qui was the
one who was knowledgeable about this planet. He did not know
the name of the town, or any others for that matter. He saw
that only one of the many buildings was lit. Naturally, that
building was a bar. Obi-Wan walked to the bar and entered
through the large metal front doors that slid automatically
open for him.
Once inside the bar something told Obi-Wan he should not make
himself known. He pulled the hood of his cloak over his head,
and then dipped his head down so his face could not be seen.
The bar was full of people. Many of them were humanoid and all
of them were loud and obviously drunk on some sort of liquor.
At first he was not able to locate his master through their
bond.
He closed his eyes and focused his mind on his master. Soon the
Force led him to a door that was at the back of the bar. He
walked cautiously towards the door ignoring the other people in
the bar as he passed them. When he reached the threshold he
focused his mind again on making himself unnoticeable. He knew
that his master would not be able to sense that he was there as
long as he did not purposely try to feel Obi-Wan's presence.
As Obi-Wan entered the room he was surprised to find that it
was a brothel. Many beds were against all four walls of the
small square room. Each bed was separated by an almost
see-through cloth drape. He could only assume that this was to
intensify the pleasure of the customers by letting them watch
and listen to others having sex.
What Obi-Wan saw next made his fragile world crash down all
around him. He saw that his master was making love to a
humanoid whore. No, not making love, fucking. He was feverishly
pushing himself into the cheap whore, completely oblivious to
his padawan. Obi-Wan decided to take a seat at a table close to
his masters' bed and listen to anything that he might say.
The words that his master uttered was so terrible that Obi-Wan
could barely stay focused enough to keep himself hidden.
Qui-Gon moaned and occasionally whispered things into the
whores' ear. Things like, "Your so much better than my
partner", "My partner always leaves me so unsatisfied", "I only
keep my partner around because he's such a blithering idiot
he'd probably get himself killed". Obi- Wan couldn't listen to
it anymore.
He rushed out of the bar and ran back to the camp. The pain he
felt was so great that he thought his heart might explode in
his chest. He almost hoped this would happen because he no
longer had much of a will to live. Nothing could have hurt him
so much as what had just happened. Eventually Obi-Wan got a
grip on himself and decided that he would simply forget the
entire experience. He tried to use the Force to remove the
tragic events but to no avail. Finally his minds own natural
defense against trauma kicked in and he went into total denial
and remained there for a long time to come.
Both of the Jedi continued on with their vacation as though
nothing terrible had happened. Obi-Wan was in complete denial
and very happy with it. They actually enjoyed the rest of the
vacation and continued on with their lives together.
Now Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan had had yet another fight and Qui had
been gone for three days. Obi-Wan relived all the traumatic
experiences his lover had put him through. Even the memories he
had denied at one time poured around the wall he had built in
his mind. At first, he could feel nothing but anger towards his
master, mixed with a lot of hurt. After hours of meditation, he
became concerned, wondering what had possessed his master to
act so uncharacteristically. Finally, he gave into his darker
feelings and became enraged at Qui-Gons callous treatment of
him and their bond. Obi-Wan slowly became filled with nothing
but vengefulness toward the man who had wronged him.
Obi-Wan pondered over the many things he could do to his master
to get him back for all the pain he had caused him. He knew
that killing him would not pay him back for the years of
torture he'd put him through. Nothing seemed to come to mind.
Nothing he could think of seemed to have the ability to fully
atone for all the pain that Obi- Wan felt at the hands of his
master. He could nothing that was dear enough to Qui-Gon that
he could take away, and cause him the kind of terrible pain the
Padawan was feeling.
After a while his mind began to wander. He started to think
about all the planets he'd been too and all the civilizations
he'd been in contact with. Then he suddenly remembered a Wookie
named Oga-Taka he'd met once. This was a Wookie that he was
glad he had as a friend and not as an enemy. Oga-Taka was large
even for a Wookie; he stood at 9 and a half feet and weighed
over 600 lbs. He also remembered that this particular Wookie
was not a friend of Qui-Gon's. There had been a
misunderstanding and Qui-Gon was responsible for the death of
Oga-Taka's cousin Chu-Taka. Qui-Gon had barely smoothed things
over with Oga-Taka but there was still some very bad blood
between the two. Obi-Wan immediately knew that this Wookie
would be the answer to getting revenge on his master.
Soon Obi-Wan had a plan of action. He did not realize nor care
that his mind and soul were teetering dangerously close to the
Dark side of the Force. His plan required much preparation in
the little time he had before his master would come back.
Obi-Wan sent a message to Oga-Taka on his home planet
requesting help and promising the Wookie the revenge he craved
against Jedi Master Qui-Gon Jinn. While waiting for a reply,
Obi-Wan made the final preparations to carry out his vengeful
plan.
Another day went by and to Obi-Wans surprise he had a visitor.
Oga- Taka had sped to Obi-Wans rooms at the Temple after
receiving the vague message. Of course the Wookie was welcomed
into Obi-Wans home. They skipped the formalities and
immediately went over the details of Obi-Wans plan. Oga-Taka
listened quietly while sitting on a chair across the dining
room table from Obi-Wan. After Obi-Wan finished, the towering
Wookie grinned an evil smile showing his sharp canine- like
teeth. Oga-Taka grew happy and said in the language of the
Wookie, "Obi-Wan, I will happily help you with this plan. I
won't even charge you for any of this work. I only ask that you
not let your Jedi side make you change your mind. If you take
what we are to do away from me I will chew your arm off and eat
it before your eyes before I kill you." To this they both
laughed.
Now that all the preparations had been made and all the
participants were ready they simply had to wait for Qui-Gon's
return. There were many thoughts racing through Obi-Wans head.
He could hear the call of the Light side of the Force even
through his severely clouded mind. He began to feel the pull of
the Light side of the Force until his mind was filled with the
horrible events that lead to his decision to get revenge on his
master. The dark side clouded his mind again even more than
before and he could only wait with great anticipation for his
master and his plan to go into action.
They waited in their now accustomed spots on the fifth day
after his masters' departure. Suddenly he sensed that Qui-Gon
was outside the door and he motioned to the Wookie that it was
time. The Wookie ran and hid behind a shelf by the door.
Obi-Wan walked toward the door and waited for his master to
open it. Electronic motors slid the door open. Standing there
was his master looking as though he had spent many days
drinking and partying. His eyes were blood-shot and he stunk of
liquor. Obi-Wan suddenly felt pity for his master. Qui-Gon shot
Obi-Wan a dirty look and reinforced Obi-Wans will to carry on
with the plan.
Obi-Wan stood directly in front of Qui-Gon and said "So your
finally back?" To that Qui-Gon simply pushed past his Padawan,
obviously heading for bed. Obi-Wan motioned to Oga-Taka and he
burst out in front of Qui-Gon. There was no time to respond as
the Wookie dropped one of his large fists right on the top of
Qui-Gons head. There was so much force that Qui-Gon had a
sudden image of himself being hammered into the floor like in a
cartoon, then the whole world around him faded away as he fell
unconscious.
The next thing that Qui-Gon knew he was hovering above his bed
spread eagle. He could feel ropes around his wrists and his
ankles. He was being suspended above the bed completely naked.
He knew right away that this was only going to get worse.
Qui-Gon was about to plead to his padawan when he noticed that
he had a ball in his mouth and a strap around his head holding
the ball in his mouth. He instinctively reached for the Force,
when he felt blinding pain shoot through him. He groaned out
loud, unable to keep silent with Force- inhibiting drugs
running through his system.
Oga-Taka saw that Qui-Gon was finally conscious after being
knocked out for over an hour. Oga-Taka growled some words at
Obi-Wan that Qui- Gon couldn't make out. Suddenly the Wookie
was behind Qui-Gon. Obi- Wan grabbed a chair and set it beside
the bed so his master could see him sitting there. Obi-Wan sat
down and stared deeply into his masters panicking eyes.
"How does it feel being so helpless Qui-Gon?" asked Obi-Wan in
a very menacing tone that Qui-Gon had never heard from his
Padawan before. Obi-Wan began yelling, "I think I'm really
going to enjoy this you pile of shit!" Suddenly the hatred
began to burn in Obi-Wan. The Padawan began yelling some more,
"Remember the whore? Remember all the times you cheated on me
you bastard? Did you fucking think that you could keep abusing
me? I love you and all you do is hurt me!"
Soon Oga-Taka felt it was time to begin his revenge. Oga-Taka's
cock was hard as a rock and he was ready to tear Qui-Gon's
little hole apart. His cock was so huge now that he thought to
himself it would be funny to watch the Jedi who killed his
cousin split in two and die before him. There was to be no
soothing lubrication for this doomed master. As the Wookie
pushed his immense rod into Qui-Gon he could hear screams of
agony being muffled by the ball in his mouth. Soon there was
blood dripping onto the bed. At first it was small drops, then
what seemed like a stream of blood steadily ran down Qui-Gons
thighs to form into a growing crimson pool on the bed.
During the whole rape Obi-Wan simply sat quietly and watched
what he had caused to happen. At first he was happy at all the
pain his master was feeling, then eventually he felt that it
was enough. He felt that he could now look at his past with
Qui-Gon and feel a lot better about himself and their
relationship. When the Wookie finished and removed his cock
from Qui-Gon's ass, Obi-Wan was ready to thank his friend and
send him on his way before talking to his master and finally
releasing him.
Oga-Taka had a different plan, one he had not said anything to
Obi- Wan about. To Obi-Wans terror he saw the Wookie pull out a
large metal sword. He knew the Wookie was about to do more to
Qui-Gon, more than Obi-Wan wanted or had counted on. Obi-Wan
leapt at the Wookie and grabbed his sword arm. The Wookie threw
Obi-Wan across the room with one powerful blow. Obi-Wan crashed
hard into the wall and fell on the floor. Obi-Wan saw that the
wookie was raising his arm to deliver a blow from the sword to
his beloved master. In one swift move, Obi-Wan ignited his
light saber and threw it at the Wookie; removing his right hand
and causing the sword to fall on the floor with a loud clang.
With a gesture of his hand Obi-Wan called his light saber back
to his side. The Wookie was still in shock at losing his hand.
Obi-Wan used the Force to light the ropes on fire to release
his master. Meanwhile, Oga-Taka had recovered from the shock
and went for the sword with his left hand. Obi-Wan began to run
toward the Wookie, desperate to save his master. The lightsaber
slipped from the Padawans hand and fell to the floor. The
Wookie raised his left arm high into the air, ready to strike
the Jedi master whose ropes still hadn't burned through.
Obi-Wan knew that Qui-Gon was about to die. In a moment that
seemed like an eternity Obi-Wan recalled all the good times he
had shared with his master. He remembered the many times his
master had showed such love for him. These memories suddenly
made Obi- Wan realize that he had only been dwelling on the bad
times and not the many good times that far outweighed them. He
had allowed the Dark side to overcome him with the fear and
pain of losing his master. He knew now what he must do to atone
for his mistakes and rejoin the Light side.
Obi-Wan sped toward the Wookie and jumped into the air between
the Wookie and Qui-Gon. The metal sword sliced through Obi-Wan
nearly detaching his upper body from his legs. The gash sliced
through his stomach and spilled out all of his intestines.
Obi-Wan fell onto the floor like a dead weight. Qui-Gon's ropes
finally burned through and in a single motion he turned in mid
air and focused all of his power into his hands. He was
relieved when he felt the ease with which the Force came to
him. He then shot a devastating Force-bolt through the mid
section of the Wookie, killing him instantly.
Qui-Gon forgot the ordeal he had just been through and crawled
over to his dying Padawan. He picked Obi-Wan up into his arms
as he sat on the floor. The Jedi master looked into his
Padawans eyes and felt himself torn with emotion so painful he
couldn't help but begin to cry. He removed the gag from his
mouth to kiss his lover one last time. Obi-Wan began to cry as
well knowing that he was leaving his master. Without a word,
Obi-Wan passed away in Qui-Gon's arms. The older man was
overpowered with grief, unable to believe that he had just lost
his lover. He couldn't stand the pain of losing him forever.
Qui-Gon was angry with himself for all of the things he had
done to his Padawan. What hurt him the most was that Obi-Wan
was willing to give his life for him because he loved him so
much. Qui-Gon knew he could never live without his Padawan. He
reached for Obi-Wans lightsaber and held it to his chest.
Through his tears he uttered his final words, "I love you,
Obi-Wan". Qui-Gon ignited the lightsaber and gasped as the
blade burned right through his heart. His lifeless body fell on
top of his Padawan, as his Force spirit joined its mate to live
out eternity in the peace of the Force.
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